Lili Marlene Vera Lynn
Contributed
Anita Kapanowska
2 weeks ago
Contents
G
Underneath the lanternAm7
By the barrack D7
gateD
Darling I rememberD7
The way you used to G
waitC
'Twas there that you whispered G
tenderlyD7
That you loved meG
You'd always beD7
My Lili of the G
lamplightD
My own Lili MarG
leneG
Time would come for roll callAm7
Time for us to D7
partD
Darling I'd caress youD7
And press you to my G
heartC
And there neath that far off G
lantern lightD7
I'd hold you tightG
We'd kiss good nightD7
My Lili of the G
lamplightD
My own Lili MarG
leneG
Orders came for sailingAm7
Somewhere over D7
thereD
All confined to barracksD7
'Twas more than I could G
bearC
I knew you were waiting G
in the streetD7
I heard your feetG
But could not meetD7
My Lili of the G
lamplightD
My own Lili MarG
leneG#
Resting in our billetA#m7
Just behind the D#7
lineD#
Even though we're partedD#7
Your lips are close G#
to mineC#
You wait where that lantern G#
softly gleamedD#7
Your sweet face seemsG#
To haunt my dreamsD#7
My Lili of the G#
lamplightD#
My own Lili MarG#
leneD#7
My Lili of the G#
lamplightD#
My own Lili MarG#
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Widziałam też wersję od C, ale wydaje mi się że to jest właściwa tonacja. Jeżeli nie, to poprawię 2 weeks ago
Piękny utwór. Czysty głos. Tonacja poprawna do tej wersji https://www.youtube.com/watch?...
Forma konwencjonalna: zwrotka, refren. Może dobrze byłoby oznaczyć te elementy utworu.
W drugiej zwrotce, 2 linia słyszę "D7" nad "p" w "part", itd.
Mile widziana interpunkcja. 2 weeks ago
Poprawiłam to D7. Nie jestem pewna gdzie zaznaczyć zwrotkę oraz refren. Nie do końca również wiem, jak zmienić interpunkcję. 2 weeks ago